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WOMAN WRITING IN AMERICA, by                

Michelle M. Tokarczyk’s "Woman Writing in America" is a meditation on economic precarity, gendered labor, and the struggle for artistic legitimacy within a capitalist framework. The poem explores the speaker’s journey from financial instability to a more stable, albeit still undervalued, intellectual and creative life. It highlights the intersection of class and gender, particularly the ways in which a woman?s labor—especially intellectual or artistic work—is often dismissed as insignificant.

The opening lines establish the tension between economic security and personal ambition: "People tell me I?m lucky my husband makes real money. / I know I am." The phrase "real money" immediately implies that the speaker?s own work is considered unreal, intangible, or even frivolous in comparison. While the speaker acknowledges her privilege in having financial support, the poem swiftly pivots to an earlier time when she did not have such security.

The central section recalls the exhausting and humiliating search for employment: "How many days / I went out looking for work." The "summer sun, an unrelenting spectator," becomes an almost hostile force, its glare a reminder of relentless exposure and failure. The seasons shift, but the hardship remains: "or the winter froze blood in my lips." The imagery of being unable to "wrap a scarf tight enough against a throat swallowing hard" suggests both physical and emotional vulnerability, as well as the difficulty of suppressing fear, hunger, and disappointment.

The repetition of "How many days" underscores the monotonous, grueling nature of job-seeking, reinforcing how often "the streets won." The speaker?s efforts to find employment are met with rejection, reinforcing a cycle of instability. When she returns home, the setting becomes a symbol of creative paralysis: "blank walls, blank splintered floors, blank sheets pulled over the cot, blank paper at the typewriter." The accumulation of "blank" emphasizes a pervasive emptiness—both literal (a lack of furnishings, comfort, or security) and metaphorical (a lack of inspiration, opportunity, or validation). Even in her own space, the speaker is stifled, and the potential for rich artistic material is wasted: "powerful images...soaked away in sweaty nightmares." Creativity, like survival, seems to be slipping out of her grasp.

The poem then shifts to the present, where the speaker now has "my own office filled with heat or cooled air, where I can press my toes into the carpeting." This moment signals a transformation: she has reached a point where she can engage with writing on her own terms, rather than seeing it as an impossible luxury. The ability to "pick for words like pens" suggests a newfound agency, as she can now actively shape language rather than being overwhelmed by blankness. However, the poem does not end on a triumphant note; instead, it introduces a stark reminder of how society continues to undervalue intellectual labor.

When applying to buy a home, the speaker realizes that her economic history—her "darmy try" (perhaps a typographical error meant to suggest "damn try" or "dreamy try")—is insufficient on its own. The sponsor’s condescending remark—"And do you intend to work?... / O, you do work... / You write... / You teach English... / I barely speak that."—is deeply ironic. It dismisses her profession while inadvertently reinforcing the necessity of her labor. The ellipses create pauses that mimic the sponsor’s skepticism, as if struggling to comprehend the idea that writing is work at all.

In "Woman Writing in America," Tokarczyk critiques the cultural and economic forces that shape a writer?s ability to create. The poem foregrounds the financial and emotional costs of being a woman in the literary world, revealing the lingering attitudes that diminish intellectual work—especially when done by women. The final lines highlight the enduring struggle for recognition, as even after securing a measure of stability, the speaker is still faced with the question of whether her labor is real. In a world that equates worth with financial gain, the poem leaves us wondering: what is the value of a writer?s work if it is only measured in dollars?


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